Numb The Pain; Opening Sequence; Final Draft.

Here is my groups final draft of our opening sequence 'Numb The Pain'.

Evaluation; Question One.

Evaluation; Question Two.

Evaluation; Question Three.

Evaluation; Question Four.

Evaluation Extras.

The picture that we took as a group whilst filming our target audience cooking show evaluation question. 

Evaluation; Question Five.

Evaluation; Question Six.

Evaluation; Question Seven.

Vlog Of Improvement.

Here is a vlog about what improvements we made between draft four and five of our opening sequence.

Technology Used Whilst Making Our Opening Sequence.

Here is a list of all the technology me and my group used whilst making our opening sequence, they was used in all five drafts.

Technology used	What it was used for
Ipad	·         Used to take pictures whilst filming. ·         Used to film part of our target audience feedback videos.
Sony Video Recorder	·         Used to film all our opening sequence drafts. ·         Used to film some of our target audiences.
Imac	·         Used to edit all out opening sequence drafts.

Vlog; Filming For Final Draft.

Here is a vlog that me and my group made whilst filming our final draft of our opening sequence in Camden Town.

Evidence Of Filming; Draft Five.

Shot of Ingrd, Jhane and Fatou getting into position. 

The director giving the main character some feedback.

The main character getting into position to start filming.

Here is a shot of Michaela filming the close up shot of the phone.

Here is a picture of ingrid getting into position to start filming.

Here is a picture of Ingrid filming the main character.

Here is a shot of Michaela getting a shot of Fatou looking in the window from the other side of the road.

Another shot of Michaela filming the main character.

Short Term Planning; Draft Five.

Here is the short term planning me and my group produced before going out to film for our final draft.

Research And Planning; Draft Five.

Here is my groups improved research and planning for our final draft of our opening sequence.

Draft 5 planning from _ingriddesouza

Vlog Of Improvement.

Here is a vlog about the improvements we made between draft three and draft four of our opening sequence.

Assessment Record For Draft Four.

SELF ASSESSMENT
PEER ASSESSMENT	N/A
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was  C3.      This is    below   /   on   /   above  (highlight one)  my target grade of a C.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  Get a wider range of shots and avoid filming from behind so much. Work on the titles and credits. Work on finding better music.

Target Audience; Draft Four.

Here is my groups target audience feedback for draft four of our opening sequence, this time we used s different approach and used questionnaires to gather information instead of recording people.

Numb The Pain; Opening Sequence; Draft Four.

Here is my groups fourth draft of our opening sequence. We have included a number of different camera shots and we picked effective music to use to create the correct atmosphere

Draft 4; Evidence Of Filming.

Part of the main characters costume.

Doing the main characters hair and make-up for filminng

Another picture of hair and make-up.

Filming for the bedroom scene.

Filming another shot for the bedroom scene.

Ingrid getting the through the window shot.

The posh shop in which we filmed around.

Part of the posh shop scene.

Establishing The Main Character; Draft Four.

Here is an annotated pictures regarding the use of makeup, costume and hair to establish the main characters appearance in our opening sequence. 

Research And Planning; Draft Four.

Here is my groups improved research and planning for draft four of our opening sequence.

Draft 4 research and planning from empressnae

Vlog Of Improvement.

Here is a vlog on the improvments we made bwteen draft two and draft three of our opening sequence.

Assessment Record For Draft Three.

SELF ASSESSMENT
PEER ASSESSMENT
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was     D1     This is    below   /   on   /   above my target grade of a C
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  Get more shots Better music Work on main characters costume

Target Audience; Draft Three.

Here is my groups target audience feedback on our third draft of our opening sequence.

Numb The Pain; Opening Sequence; Draft Three.

Here is my groups third draft of our opening sequence. We have included a number of different camera shots and we picked effective music to use to create the correct atmosphere.

Evidence Of Editing.

Here is a picture of my group editing our third draft of our opening sequence on our apple mac computer using imovie.

Cinema Post; Dark Skies.

During the Easter half term I attended the cinema to watch dark skies directed by Scott Stewart, which is an American sci-fi horror about one families struggle to worn off aliens from there young son.

Main Actors

• Keri Russell
• Josh Hamilton
• Dakota Goyo
• Kadan Rockett
• J.K Simmons

Dark skies shows a normal family in which aliens forces, known as the 'greys' start destroying their family unit, they start pulling the family apart slowly, eventually they learn they must fight off the aliens, however they do not succeed and eventually the families oldest son, 13 year old Jesse is abducted by the alien force.

Evidence Of Filming; Draft Three.

Filming the bedroom scene.

Another shot of the bedroom scene.

Ingrid getting another shot of the bedroom scene.

New Locations Used For Draft Three.

We filmed the shop scene in and outside Bexy Lady in Whiteleys shopping centre.

We filmed the scene involving the shop in Whiteleys shopping center in Bayswater London.

We filmed the bus scene on the 18 bus.

Research And Planning; Draft Three.

Here is my groups improved research and planning for draft three of our opening sequence.

Draft 3 - Research and Planning from FatouPanzout

Assessment Record For Opening Sequence Draft Two.

SELF ASSESSMENT
PEER ASSESSMENT	N/A
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was E2.      This is    below   /   on   /   above  my target grade of a C.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  ·         Better locations. ·         Better Mise-En-Scene. ·         Better credits.

Vlog Of Improvement.

Here is a vlog talking about what we changed between draft one and two of our opening sequence.

Target Audience; Draft Two.

Here is my groups target audience feedback on our second draft of our opening sequence.

Numb The Pain; Opening Sequence; Draft Two.

Here is my groups second draft of our opening sequence. We have included a number of different camera shots and we picked effective music to use to create the correct atmosphere.

Draft Two; Evidence Of Filming.

Jhané and Michaela just before filming begins.

Jhané doing that main characters hair and makeup before filming.

Another shot of Jhané doing the main characters hair.

Main character in final costume for scene.

Fatou in costume as the boy character.

New Locations Used For Draft Two.

We filmed the bus scene on the 83 bus.

Establishing The Main Character; Draft Two.

Here is an annotated pictures regarding the use of makeup, costume and hair to establish the main characters appearance in our opening sequence. 

Research And Planning; Draft Two.

Here is my groups improved planning assignment; completed by me.

Assessment Record For Opening Sequence Draft One.

SELF ASSESSMENT
PEER ASSESSMENT	N/A
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was U.      This is    below   /   on   /   above    my target grade of a C.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:

Target Audience; Draft One.

Here is my groups target audience feedback for our first draft of our opening sequence.

Numb The Pain; Opening Sequence; Draft One.

Here is my groups first draft of our opening sequence. We have included a number of different camera shots and we picked effective music to use to create the correct atmosphere.

Production And Distribution Company Research; Draft One.

Here is the Research I completed on our groups chosen production company for draft one of our opening sequence.

Basic Imovie Editing Tutorial.

Here is a video I found on youtube about how to do basic editing on imovie.

Draft One; Evidence Of Filming.

Director Fatou Panzout getting a shot of main character Michaela Ives Kingshott.

Director getting a long shot of main character during the final scene.

Choosen Location, Olympic Way, Wembley.

Another choosen location, Wembley Park train station.

Olympic Way road sign in which we filmed under.

Bed we used during the bedroom scene.

Props used as part of mise-en-scene for the bedroom scene.